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Teeth

Your teeth are sexy
They make my blood rush
I never seen it in anyone, they attract me so much
So, so unique, that I want to touch.

If you’re tired baby call me, don’t blush
leave it on me I’ll be too happy to brush
but don’t tell anyone ! shh hush!
On your teeth I have a major crush.

© Shuberth Dias

Author notes

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WHAT’S IT ABOUT?

“Teeth” is a 2007 horror-black comedy film written and directed by Mitchell Lichtenstein, about a teenage girl who has teeth in her vagina.
lol one day she comes to know that she is different than other girls, she has troubles in having a boyfriend relationship, masturbation… etc. the teeth would get them, and every boy who has sex with her would lose their manly thing. She goes up to a doctor for a check up, by examining her the poor doctor loses his hand too. Lol this movie is very funny.
My brother Glenn buyed this DVD and gave it to me, he wanted me to see it. It’s his one of favorite movie too.

WHY IS IT YOUR FAVORITE ?

This is one of my favorite move, it makes me laugh and curious at the same time. It’s very interesting.

WHEN DID IT COME OUT ? (What yr?)

It premiered January 19, 2007 at the 2007 Sundance Film Festival in the independent drama category. It was released on DVD in the United States on May 6, 2008, by Dimension Extreme.


WIN ANY AWARDS?

I have no idea if it has won any awards or not

WHAT LANGUAGE IS IT IN ?

Its in English

A contest entry

How will I come to know if you read this thing or not if you don’t leave your comment ?

    : , Your review:

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Comments

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  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    August 27
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    Well..I always look at peoples teeth...but not overthere..


  • Love of a Bullet
    August 11

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    There is some messed up stuff going on here. I think I was better off critiquing this before I read the explanation... lol. I think as a matter of taste it is impossible to say that anything is objectively gross, but this comes pretty close... :-) As far as the piece standing on its own goes, well, there is a funny little sing song vibe to the poem that is enjoyable and as far as poetry lite goes, it manages well enough.

    ~Das


    • Shuberth
      August 11
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      it would be better for it to say other than typing this those long thing in very short and in understable way, in just 3 words that...
      "this poem sucks!"


      • Love of a Bullet
        August 11
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        But you don't get nearly the points for that... besides, I didn't think it sucked in the traditional sense.

  • Juno101
    August 11

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    Yo, I think this poem is interesting and I find it unusual. I think the title "teeth" has a lot of potential and I think this poem could be much better but I still enjoyed. Thanks for joining my moresome.

    Thanks so much for the notes. The plot is hilarious.

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