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Growing flowers

Fresh love
New start
Feelings in hearts
Connections flying around
It's Spring
Flowers are growing
I am giving myself to you
I don't want more distances
Let's take each other
And play as much
Hear me
Let me hear you
My whole in one
Laughing around a powerful sun
As the sea purifies us

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