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Lie To me

Lie to me...
Tell me that I'm
The most beautiful girl
You have ever laid eyes on.

Lie to me...
Tell me that I'm
The best thing
That you have ever had!

Lie to me...
Tell me that you love me...
For I need to feel
Like i am loved!

Lie to me,
Tell me you will never hurt me...
Then turn right around
And break my heart!

Lie to me, Baby...
just lie to me!

Author notes

...meh

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  • TwiztidMaggot
    August 11

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    Wow hun, this is a very well written piece! I love how you wrote it!!! Very wonderful work. I can relate to it...

    TwiztidMaggot