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The Alley Part 8 (8-4-09)

About to turn and ask what was meant
but his words rang out "don't talk or move"
Instead I only slightly turn ma head
to see his face and expression
he's gleaming, smiling at me...

I start to mouth what does he mean
when he whispers I'll tell you soon enough

The woman who had previously sat in front of this huge audience
was now suddenly standing in front of me
Speaking to me although I did not know it
Uttering things about welcome to tha family
and he's waited centuries

My mind wrapped around just that word
centuries?!?!

Gently taking my hand she leads me
out the big wooden doors once more

I was in nothing but a daze as she led me on
Eventually ended up in a what looked like a living room but grander

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