Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Saga 11...Demise of the Dark Horse

Missing image

unable to roam the adventurous space

through a lifetime he captured both status and grace

he now is stranded in the meadow of green

looking poorly in his appearance both sad and lean

 

partners in affection to the graceful white mare

telling her each day how much he cares

their colt is now grown into a black stallion so wild

that roams the area freely in magnificent style

 

a roamer is he that takes to the fields

over the mountains and valleys for a filly that yields

the white mare walks silently among the weeping trees

knowing the dark horse is ill and weak in his knees

 

not long has he left

before his earth meets the skies

and the deep darkness surrounds his kingdom

as he meets his demise

 

the black stallion his son so wild

and the white mare his lovely bride

are left alone in the meadow

without the dark horse to be their guide

 

freely they wander along the flowing stream

under the weeping willows of luscious green

missing the dark horse of gracious pride

they grieve together side by side

 

both cried !

 

 

 

In a list

welcome all comments

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • arafura gold member
    August 11
    Edit | Reply
    I love these horse poems of yours. Wonderful work.


  • Tears of Roses
    August 11

    Edit | Reply
    very lovely
    I think I would look at dropping one of the nows in
    line three the two nows kind of throws it off some
    Roses to you

    Teresa