I was lost
Till you showed
Me the right path
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Something that is true..
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Love it.
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A great piece
Short but true.
Great write and keep scribbling -
This was simple but filled with thanks and beauty.
A wonderful write my friend,
~Lisa~
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Powerful, and so truthful about some of us, who have either shown another the right path, or had to be directed the right way. It could have a spiritual meaning, or as a love who needed to guide you...
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Lovely to be shown the right path. I presume it is a love poem.
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Well done.Your words go so well with the picture you have chosen.A poem that gives who ever reads it hope that there is someone or something out there for all of us, to show us the way, Ros
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Hey nice image,I guess you wrote the poem in past tense
"I was lost,till you showed me the right path ,sounds better isn't it?
Anyways it good to know that if it happened to you in real,then you have found the right path
thats great
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Hi i have fixed it as you have pointed out
i am grateful to you
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That is sooo nice, and cute. Good job
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Very short and very sweet! Well done! Brother you have so much talent!
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And honestly, some people don't know what they are talking about. You did a really good job on this and that certain female needs to go work on making her poetry better. She doesn't know good poetry when she reads it and probably can't write it either. Very well done brother!
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how sweet... x
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How sweet! Made such an impact on my heart! Well done my brother! One thing. 'Show' should be 'showed.' Good job and good luck!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker Who Lost All -
'' Me the right path " i love this part , very nice but i wish if you can do better then this .
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stunning
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The title says it all, your pillar of strength great write
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Wow
Nice one, the feeling of hope and belief in the one man you hold dear... nicely penned,
Zia,
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