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perennial



you are
nothing but limbs,
weaving your fingers  to break the wind
between the branches of your caprice.

--

your heart hangs in tendrils;

a disembodied echo
between my breath.





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  • David. Enjoy.
    August 11

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    It's very cryptic, but I get a sense of...hesitant acceptance of something.

    Maybe some resentment.

    I like the color choice, too...it sort of implies that these thoughts are pushed back into some kind of haze.

    Although, I may be reading too much into it.