Little eyes see no wrong in
their magnificance role model
Author notes
Father- he was my role model and to me he could do no wrong.
A contest entry
- In 10 words! by Lavender Butterfly.
600 points, ended August 12, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this write is short but has a lot of emotion in it. it is very cute. good job and good luck in the contests
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This is such a sweet and cute write. I agree, it's amazing how much one can say in such few words. Or in other situations no words at all. I really liked this. Well done.
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Short but Sweet
It's funny how ten words can have so much power. I'm sure if I had attempted this contest, I would have just fumbled around and come up with something incomprehensible. You on the other hand (as usual) have written another brilliant poem. Thank you for sharing your gift and it's nice to continue to see you express yourself through the gift that God has given you.
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how true... x
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yay!
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So true, a very good reason to stay on "the straight an narrow", wouldn't you say? We can at least do our best..
Your poem says so much in just a few words, so much truth. WELL DONE.
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Wise words for sure. That is the way little ones see them, so it puts greater responsibility on those role models to be good ones. Excellent thought.
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this is good, best of luck in the contest
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