it all came crashing down
the day you went away
A contest entry
- In 10 words! by Lavender Butterfly.
600 points, ended August 12, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I'm sure many can relate to this... x
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i love you.
you are going to be all right, aparna. i admire your courage, quiet, sensibility- you can keep your head. keep it up dear. i love you so much. you are a brilliant girl, and whatever happens, i will be here for you. always. promise.
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strong emotions, a good write, best of luck in the contest
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wow. this is so strong. well, at first i thought this was just another breakup type of poem, but then i checked out the prompt and realised what it really meant.
heyy, i know its hard for you to live with all the problems you're having with your dad, but you can always talk to us about it. i can try cracking some ridiculous banana joke to try cheer you up! love ya tonnes girly!!!
we're alwaays gonna be here for you sistahh 
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So very heart breaking and sad, but too true a story for so many.
I hope this isn't a personal write.
Nicely penned. Good luck to you!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker Who lost All
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