Never got care
of a mother
but love her forever
of a mother
but love her forever
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I really have never got a mother's love, i dont know how she look like..but i truly love her most in my heart deep deep deep inside..
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I neva thought poemz dis shrt exist
I think it's too short to be a poem,
but has all that makes a poem a poem.
You learn you grow right!
I RESPECT. -
beautiful, touching and meaningful
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That is short, but has alot of feeling to it. I like it!
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your picture is miss leading to me. Add that with your poem and I took it to read that we are not caring for our mother... Mother earth. Then I read your AN and find that you actually mean your biological parent not your planet.
hmmm....
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So deeply sad and beautiful... x
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short and nice
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So short and so sweet. Its amazing how something so small can mean so much. Very well done!
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short and very sweet
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it's very emotional , I must say this to you" the man who love's is mothere ,he or she. is a wonderful person .
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A very touching and heartfelt piece, beautifully done.
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Very nice.
Short, sweet, heartfelt, and endearing.
Good luck in the contest.
I'm in it as well and in the 'Father' one too.
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker Who lost All
P.s. Don't forget to credit pics if they are not your own.
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yeah, with so little you can feel so much, nice job
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True
Wonderful how a child's mind works regardless of shattered dreams or hopes destroyed the love that resides in our heart is that of pure love towards our mother... I always wonder if they truly know what we feel? if the burden of having us would vanish in the very words of love, the thought of being held by a mother?? how wonderful is our love? that loves regardless of shame or unknown motherly affection
Nicely put
Zia,
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