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dull




when I read things I wrote
years or months or
hell, even weeks ago

I sometimes wonder
how I crammed more life
into the lines of text
on a computer screen

than I did
into the hours of time
in my actual existence.



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  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    September 4
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    ahh...so true...I can relate to this a lot.


  • kidwithgun silver member
    August 12

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    no kidding right? good point for all of us to consider


  • Miss Faith
    August 11

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    great to see something from you love...

    I miss your work..and I can agree quite a bit about my own work....


  • LadyLover
    August 11

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    I concur that is exactly what I think to.
    Well that or "did I really write that?" lol.
    Nud

  • piggyback
    August 11

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    wow, that's gotta hurt. Loved the title - it's one word with so many meanings and it says so much. I enjoy how concise this poem is. It's very conversational and, in ways, really doesn't sound special - but the over simplicity and the brutal honesty and the brevity of it make me really love it.


    • DrunktankLullaby
      August 11
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      thank you so much for the thoughtful comment. I always enjoy a comment someone has clearly put a little thought into.


  • lively banter
    August 11

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    Wow, I love it. I usually hate poetry relating to writing but this poem is special. That ending made was perfect.

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