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Awakening


my welted flesh repelled the breeze,
as tears were rolling down my face,
at last my heart had found it's place.
when first i sank upon my knees.

Your want is all i need to do,
and freely give myself to One.
the pain is gone, my heart undone,
by One as beautiful as You.




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  • Tears of Roses
    August 21
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    So very true
    I loved the beauty of this
    it's deep yet so tender.
    Roses to you

    Teresa