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??Dirty Pretty??

ice cold b|_ade
cut-ing D_E_E_P
IN→TO my S[o]ft ,, tenderr sk!n

blood starts to
                      D
                        r
                          i
                          p

as my blad3 starts to
                                S
                                  l
                                    i
                                    p

mv  head B.comes  D,,
  /                                  :I:
                          Z;;                    Z.,.
                                  >>V<<
                                      /

my vision>_> gets
                            f
                          !
                              :Z:z:
              V
            _ /

gon3 goes |_ittle Mis(ee)

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  • Moon Maiden
    November 18
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    This is a good attempt at your first Dirty Pretty. really good!


  • misshugglebugglez
    August 11

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    sunny this was great! jeezzz you've inspired me. im gonna try writin stuff like that! heehee yay! finally i have something to write! i loved this, its really cool and wonderful. i love the form and everything. and how r you? we havent talked in foreverrr.
    hugggggggggglezzzz,
    ur bff adria =]