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Perfect Man

You are the perfect man
That god create by his hand
I can never ask for more
Than for you to feel the same
You were sent from above
That i would never doubt
You make me feel so safe
and always having faith
I never forget the good time
writing our name on the sand
meanwhile the waves wipe it out
spreading it over the ocean side
you are the perfect man
I'll love you till the end of time






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