What is goin on around me,
I do not know anymore,
I wonder alone at night,
Still I see nothing,
Wondering if anyone will find me,
Stopping in the light of the moon,
Only to see more darkness infront of me,
Putting my head down I walk on,
Into the night I go,
Alone and broken again,
Nothing to save me but her voice,
The touch of her skin,
Again I'm alone,
In the dark I walk,
Hopping the day will come,
Where I see her face again.
A contest entry
- Anything Goes! by Karra-Mayy.
1600 points, ended November 21, 317 entries
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awe babe. this is sad, and i hope the best for u. very beatifully written as well!
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this is great. great job
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she'll see that she was wrong to leave you once again gary. but im always going to be here for you gary. your a really good friend.

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mm.... very good and flowing really well ,




