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Wondering

What is goin on around me,
I do not know anymore,
I wonder alone at night,
Still I see nothing,

Wondering if anyone will find me,
Stopping in the light of the moon,
Only to see more darkness infront of me,
Putting my head down I walk on,

Into the night I go,
Alone and broken again,
Nothing to save me but her voice,
The touch of her skin,

Again I'm alone,
In the dark I walk,
Hopping the day will come,
Where I see her face again.

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  • the russian
    August 11
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    awe babe. this is sad, and i hope the best for u. very beatifully written as well! s es!


  • StillLovingYou
    August 11
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    this is great. great job


  • XxVampyressxX
    August 11

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    she'll see that she was wrong to leave you once again gary. but im always going to be here for you gary. your a really good friend.


  • sonia 77
    August 11
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    mm.... very good and flowing really well ,