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An occasional passerby
Somehow I doubt that these monkeys wont listen to reason
Somehow I doubt that they'll ever learn

Jokes on them..
We'll all die soon...
Invisioning their demise and their faces
As our world is changed forever almost in an instant that seems to last for eternity
Well this is it, this is it...
Time for the worlds beggining and the end of dumbfounded dipshits

Mother and Father planned this from the very begining
Moving land and sea,
Gravity and space,
Wind and flame...

The earth will tremble incessantly
The oceans will rise in rebellion
Rock and flame errupting to counter the oceanic current
As disembodied debri of the worlds misfortune, are blown into the wind

The monkeys shall scurry in retreat
Confederacy just as guilty, will hide in their cowardess ways
Leaving all helpless, hopless..and to die
Without chance, without fate, and without the slightest bit of irony..
There could be no better way, to go out with a bang..

Four riders..in the midst
White, black, red, and a pale complexion
Accompanied by a fifth...the final plague
And Armageddon will being..

For it is not an the end of something
It is a battlefield...
Holding malice and judgment
No more loyalties are withheld from the sacrament

The monkeys shall choose a side
Dark or light
One way or another
Their journey in life will begin..

In abyss or in bliss
Forever to suffer or fade into enlightenment
Grasp the possibility..harness the knowledge
And pour your soul into everything you foster for

The omnipotent creator
Will destroy bone and the sinews of the world
With but a word, like that of a sword, from his mouth......

Delight in peace, not war

(not finished..yeah, again)....um not sure about the last few lines yet still deciding what i should do.. :\

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  • MutilatedMe
    August 12

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    incredible must finish! you are explaining the end of the world it just has to be finished everyone must kn


  • Defective Soul
    August 11

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    Ugh!!!!!! You HAVE to finish it!!! It's so good!!! *sigh* If you really can't finish it though, maybe just cut those last two lines. Although, that would leave something missing, hmm? Not sure. Lol. I'll be looking back on it though. So get to work!!