When you say that you love me
Does it mean you really care?
When you say forever and ever
Will you alway be there?
You say we'll be together
As long as we're both here
But does it matter to you
Whether I'm far or near
If I go out
Will she be in your arms?
If my love you doubt
Will you elsewhere use your charm?
Can I truly trust you
Or will you harm my heart?
Will you warm my empty soul
Of tear all my dreams apart?
-Forever and Ever Babe
Author notes
I needed to hear a soppy love story, so I wrote a poem. tell me about your love life.
Any revision sugestions?
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it was so cute
this shows what my ex-boyfriend felt. he said he loved my for ever and ever but now hes 50 or miles away. i lovethis poem,.
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well...no love life here...so..yeah..id suppose id say...or think that..if i was in love
great write
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Lovely write. You were a bit sloppy, but thats ok, all love writes are sloppy. But this poem expressed to me your emotions, your questions that went unanswered and gave you sorrow. Nice write.
Sincerely,
Deathwolf Tasagka
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Thank you. It was about a year ago I wrote this. You got what I wanted out of it.
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LIKED IT LOTS
i enjoyed reading this poem. keep up the awsome work.
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