From dark to light now
Peeking through the mist of time
I hear you speaking
Light makes life more free
Rain washing away the pain
Storm clouds still in sight
Love makes living true
Once again you give me light
This time I have won
Author notes
Three Haikus together to make up a conjoined thought. The phrases might seem a little mixed up and disjointed, but each word has a meaning to me.
I'm breathing again if anyone was worried. And thinking a little more clearly as well. Thanks to all who have been a help to me lately.
Pixie
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well I really ove this poem from you and I really enjoyed how you jointed together three Haiku's together that all deal along the same topic. any ways from a haiku to Haiku basis this is what I got from em:
the first Hiaku deals with spirituality and how we all deal wth ourselves different;y. like your first line to me represents the darkness that someojne is enshrouded in and ther eis a pin point of light that helps them break through these murky waters persay and the next line defines what I just said bout a pinpoint of light ect. and the clincher is someone reach out to that perosn helpin' em bring them back to life and reality ect.
the second haiku to me represents the former life one was in and now is washed with anew feelings and out take on life. basically you're mirroring your own life and comparing it to the dakr tiems you went through before which made you all that much stronger and thats what I grasped from the second Haiku on the line to line absis where the rain is cleansing the darkness that consumed you and the storm clouds are still the darkness that lingers within you bur you're battling it more upfront than you would have at one time ect.
the third Haiku to me represents where you have found friends and someone special that helped you cope manage and helped you through the harder times in your life where you were strugglin to breath and live your new found life ect. and this new take on life has renewed the energy level you once had but now have regained and the last line is your way of symbolizing your victory over your old self and how you are going to live life to the fullest ect.
any ways that is Tiger's take on the Haiku series here. it doesn't matter if I got it wrong or if I got it wrong its just how I saw it. any ays great write my sweet friend and keep up the marvelous work as always.
Warmest Reguards,
Tiger
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