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Darkened Angel

 

 

 

 

She sits,

she thinks,

she cries.

 

The lies were that were told

the times that have been taken

sadness abounds.

 

Dark angel, being of darkness,

where did your light go?

destruction coming over you.

 

Child of darkness,

child of death,

child of so much harm.

 

Your life will be of ebony,

your thought of inky black,

dark angel never again take back.

 

Forever fallen, forever gone,

time will not be so kind to you,

live you life all alone.

 

Daylight falls, night ebbs,

you remain in your crouched position,

past finalized, personified, death comes.

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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    November 16
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    Awesome...

    Strong piece that engages the reader & enthrals throughout with wonderful imagery & depth...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!

  • Terrific write! I think in the stanza above the last in the last line you meant "your" instead of "you". It's a great write though! Thanks so much for sharing!


  • trekkergirl
    August 15

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    hmmm... gotta admit this was not one of my favorites of yours. Read a little stiff to me. I dunno what it is about it. Maybe it was the topic. I dunno. Usually I love your writings.

    Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • of insincerity
    August 13

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    you seem to have not read the rules for my contest as you gave me freeverse and did not put your name in the AN.

    please feel free to enter again, but please read the rules carefully.


    • Maili Knephthan gold member
      August 13
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      got news for you I looked up prose on the internet and went by what they said sy this was prose but w/e

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