Can I sip your sweet wine,
Tasting heaven on earth?
May I discover hidden treasures,
Priceless in worth?
Will you succumb to me,
In all that I am?
Eliminate insecurities,
I'll care for you, madame.
Author notes
Picture Prompt
No PC
25-40 words
In a list
A contest entry
- Sensual Quickie # 4 by Beautiful-N-Broken.
550 points, ended August 10, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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one hell of a prop for any young lady Very well done!!!!
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nicely done with sensuality and something a bit more, hinting at a deeper story in the second stanza. good poem.
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Wow
amazing I love this piece, aaah you did well on the prompt of this contest and that gold trophy was well deserved
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I can see how good this poem is. Perfect from all aspect..the name ..background .. poem .. expression everything is perfect..and cool..
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This is well worthy of the gold. Love your rhyme you have here as well.
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Thanks so much!
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very good! well done!!!
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Thanks!
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Congratulations to you on your gold dear!
Well done and keep up the wonderful work here!
Jeremy0826
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Thanks so much Jeremy. Congrats on an hm! Hm's weren't originally offerred, I guess you persuaded her otherwise.
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Wow, very beautiful and sensual words here my friend!
I love the thought that you put into this one.
I wish you well and thanks a lot for sharing your talent
with me once again! Take care and good luck to you!
Jeremy0826
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OOOOh! Very Very Nice! I loved this! It's an amazing write! Thanks for sharing and for entering the contest. Good luck!
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