Obsession
Compulsion
Addiction
To being unaddicted
Stuck on
Hung up
Cannot let go
Keep on
Cling to
Grasp tight
Knuckles white
Dependence
On being independent
Urgent fixation
Can’t stop thinking
Mind won’t rest
Wore out
Catch my breathe
Don’t hold tight
Don’t let go
Say it all aloud
Don’t want you to know
Elated Fixation
Enchanting Fascination
Cannot stop this obsession
Cannot forget your smile
See it when I close my eyes
Feel it in my soul
Cannot let go
Make it stop
Please don’t stop
Cannot make it stop
Do not make it stop
Can’t breathe
Have to stop
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Interesting write and actually it flows very well for something you shut your eyes and wrote
Nicely written.
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I really like this. I would just captiallize "OCD" in the title
BUt love LOVE how everything is short and cut off, very nicely done
Welcome to AP, can't wait to read more
Thanks for sharing, & have a great day!
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Thanks! When I wrote it, I was having one of "those" days. Nothing I was thinking would come out right. So, I took a deep breath, closed my eyes and just typed. When I was done, this was there. I have thought of a few ways to change it, rhyme a little, but couldn't bring myself to. I think this is what it was meant to be. Disorganized. Just like my brain when I get on one of my obsessive kicks.
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Oh yeah I totally understand, the product is AWESOME I really enjoyed it
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Hey, really love this piece, especially the last few lines xxx
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