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she was love(less)

She was scared
She was quiet
She was the one
The one who was lost
who couldn't love
couldn't trust
She couldn't bear it
She was running
From or to
It didn't matter
For everything
that was to happen and did
She was there to blame
She
Her
I
We're all the same

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  • Shinkei Shinto
    August 10

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    Oddly beautiful. I don't know what you're referring to here, an event or thought perhaps, but I know what it's like. It's short but oddly entrancing. You might just want to add some punctuation, though. Even so, beautiful poem!