The pain inside me I can’t stand
Why they ignore me now I understand,
As tears flow through my eyes and hit the floor
The happiness inside me is no more.
The dreams inside me are all gone
This Sorrow in my life is born.
I can’t run, I see no another way
All I know is this pain will forever stay.
You stare at me you can hear me cry
You know what I feel and that I want to die
I love you Lord, but look at me
Look upon my life, Don’t you have some pity ?
Dear God is it too much to ask ?
If I begged you will you complete this task ?
Bring my life to an end
With no more hope in a form of a fake friend.
As I pray right now
Please answers my prayer somehow
But don’t take too long
Let me go to the place where I belong.
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Wrote : 11 August 2009 Tuesday, 3:38:18 AM
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ohh..my...gosh, Shuberth, this makes me cry. you dont really....but you can't.....oh my god....Shuberth, please....... ohh. the...the poem itself is wonderful, u know, if it was just a poem, but its not just a poem, im sooo sorry
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Heartfelt...
This poem is very emotional. I fell in love with the empathy of it all. Though a time of sorrow, also a time of reflection. A time for us all to examine ourselves and figure out where we are headed. Awesome!
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This is very good, and i often feel this way. When i read it, i could feel the emotion
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I can feel the pain through your words. Expressed so well. I have been in this place and I can relate through your well written poem.
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beautiful
it really describes your emotions
it's also very good at describing how a person can feel when surrounded by false friends. i know this feeling and i can relate to it seeing that i sometimes wish for the exact same thing that this poem described. yet i can't stop to think that even though i have a lot of problems, i will not give up on having a little bit of hope in myself that i can surpass any obstacles that come in my way and i really hope that you'll do the same
a very nice poem -
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Thanks for the read and the comment,
There are a lot for differences between you and me
I can tell, I haven’t felt the things you felt, and you haven’t felt the way I feel there’s a lot to talk about but I wont. n what I’m still in . This pain has no healing that’s all I can see. Anddddddd These fake people on here keep F%$%$^& my mind, calling me a friend for one day and then shit !
This is one of the fake lines I ever heard on AP
“I’m here for you if you ever need to talk”
But are they really there ???? hell NO !!!
Another one of them called me as their friend and what she/he talked about me made me think, ya she/he is my one bff.
But what made me go nuts Now she/he don’t even know who I am how I am or do I exist ?
F%&^!
I saw em oline and I said “hello”
But WTF
The reply I got was “sorry I’m at work!!!!!”
This was one of that person that said “I’m there for you if you need to talk”
But now you see, was he/she there ? F$^$ NO !!!
I was not on for a period of like 2 months, and nope, there wasn’t a single message saying, where are you or how are you ? Are u dead ?
What a fake talks
Those people talked to me when I was on, but when I wasn’t on for a period for months twice there was no a single message or email.
And when I came back some lied that they were sorry that they were wasn’t on too lately. But liars what they didn’t know I was checking their status and pages by coming in as a guest user.
Now I’m trying to get it out of my head, not waste my time over loving, caring and thinking of those fake friends on AP.
Now I have to be bad and disgusting when they didn’t care when I was good.
Thanks for the read and no offence meant to you at all
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