Don't you see me fly with such extreme hight,
as I soar through the flamboyant blue sky!
I move as swiftly, no, swifter than airplanes which are compared to leaves in the breeze next to the greatness of my wings,
They expand with such length as I am consumed into the clouds,
Without a care as I pass through you.
Don't you see me fly with such extreme hight,
You stare in Jealousy, you envy me. You wish to be as great as me.
I am as quick as a tiger, as it plunges after it's pray.
With the confidence of a pecock spreading it polychromatic feathers.
Without a care as I pass through you.
Don't you see me fly with such extreme hight,
ever so absent minded
Passing by my loved ones, forgeting memories
Taking everyone for grantet, not caring for a soul other than my own
Without a care as I pass through you.
Don't you see me fly with such extreme hight,
but why do you all stare at me in such loud silence?
Are you not proud of all my miraculous accomplishments?
Or is it jealousy that blindes your eyes of my elegance?
For I am not egotistical. You are all just green-eyed
Don't you see me fall ever so quickly,
Crying, you support has left me.
For I can no longer soar on your wings
I forever fall, because I have let you down.
I am so sorry, I say as the final tear falls.
While you all pass by me...without a care.
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This girl. This girl is me.
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Very well written piece
In a lifetime we all fall and rise throughout our life . The way we find ourselves is by understanding by seeing how others see us .You see often we change ourselves and in doiing so those about us that loves us tend to laugh and criticise which makes us fall even deeper and more rebelliant to what we were and what we have let ourselves become . Our guardean angel is not someone from within for if this was so then our shadow would take our hand and guide us away from danger .Guardean angels are those whoo reach out to you wanting to help you find the way back to happiness .Those are often pushed away .
Have you ever had a stranger see yuou crying and they ask is there anything I can do . That is a guardean angel sent you way .What did you do to this angel of care did you shout at them to mind their own business .Or did you turn away from this person ignoring their jeature of love . Eyes wide open is the only way to see the love about you
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aww thisn is so good... the poem i mean. its sad though. how ppl go from happiness then come crashing down. to me it sounded like a grl hu took everything for granted then collapsed as the, uhm, support? gets taken from under her...anyways, yea loved the poem. great job
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i kno i told u already but this is great! i love it!
~Destiny
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