When times seem too hard to bear and I feel like giving up so much
I vision your beautiful face, the twinkle of your eyes and things of such
The bond we created from my womb to the day you were born
Is a mother and daughter bond that can never be torn
With the strength and guidance of God and the blessings he pours down from above
I want to be the best mom I can be to you and embrace you with all my love
You are as precious as a flower and as gorgeous as a rose
You have been specially made to the very tip of your nose
You are as sweet as honey; such an innocent young child
You are brighter than any star in the sky every time you smile
I want you to be proud of who you are and strive to be the best
Put forth your efforts to achieve your goals and let God do the rest
I will always be your mother first, but I'm also your friend
An angel of light and a God send
And all the small things that you do make it worth living
Your are the most precious gift, that I've ever been given
Author notes
This is for my Daughter,Mackenzie.
A contest entry
- Daughters by white stone.
900 points, ended September 22, 14 entries
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Comments
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Very emotional and rich with description and detail. I like it. You're daughter is lucky to have a mom who loves her so much. I think this could use some punctuation to help the reader out with meter, though. Thanks for the entry.
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beautiful!!
very very much so..i love this, and damned if i don't 'feel' you lady..
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oh soooo sweet and precious such beautiful love to read first thing and wot a great muma u r xo
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