On the shore, white sand withdraws my footsteps from the minds eye,
as a final resting place of fears, washed away by the waves...
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- Lines in the sand
A contest entry
- Click 47. by perfectsunset.
625 points, ended August 25, 26 entries
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Washed away fears....
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intelligent
use of imagery here white sands withdraws...from the ye of the mind
and final resting place of fears washed away by waves..many in fact treta the ocean shoreas asymbol that actually doe this psych -
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Thnxs...glad you think I am intelligent..
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beautiful!
you managed to pack such imagery and emotion into so few words, and that takes real talent.
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Beautifully done.
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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That is very nice =]
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beautiful!
Your words tell a tender story about these lines in the sand. I like the idea of the ocean washing away our fears. Very creative thinking my friend.
Good luck in this contest!
Jeannette 
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Yay, I'm speechless! How beautiful indeed, no beautiful is shameless of being used here, I choose eplendid! Afarin, dear friend
Thank you for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest
~Massy~
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so beautiful in so few words,
love it
Tasha
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Thankies Tashie..
You know I love the beach...
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