A wise friend once told me, we all have a certain power, that power is what many know we all have but not all know how to use it , you can bring a person up by your words, bring a person down by your words, make a person laugh by your words, make a person happy, sad, strong,weak, better, worse, live, die,hope, or dream. We control one another, one way or the other and by our actions. We can control how a persons lives from day to day, do you like that much power?
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the power of words can make or break a soul with one slip of the tongue the rest the story is told.. for in ones life the best gift of all is the one you share of you heart and gift in song well penned dear one.. thought provoking and words to live upon Hugs always Angel♥
and prayers to comfort all always♥
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So true
We all have our own power. I think some stanzas would've been easier to read, but I love the basis.
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I never thought of it like that...
that was soo true, you could stop someone from killing themselves, just by saying, I love you. GREAT WRITE!!!!
::Good Luck::
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No, I do not. Hitler mis-used that kind of power. Gibran did just the opposite, as other great poets/philosophers, and other writers have done. This was very well written, indeed. Thanks for sharing. -
the power we give others by what we say or more importantly, the power we give them in what they say. interesting read.
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I think its thought-provoking and very interesting. Good job.
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