We fly through the sky
with the greatest of ease,
watch folks walk by
as we fly through the trees.
We usually are not seen
till on one we land.
Most humans are mean,
and we don't understand.
We kiss their bare skin
with love in our heart.
Then they begin
to tear us apart.
A love bite from us
and they swat us to death.
They make such a fuss
as we take our last breath.
Just fairies are we
from our head to our toes.
What people see
are mosquitoes!
A contest entry
- Rhyme Me Again by AliceinPoetryLand.
1200 points, ended August 24, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honest Opinion?
Comments
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fairies ??? makes one stop to think...but, do they have to "sing"..buzz to us humans...makes me want to swat them...thanks for the pause to wonder about fireflies
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Fairies? Oops I've swatted dozens. Will you please stop eating me alive
Love your poem 
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Outstanding
This is so funny! I can just imagine all these fairies trying to embrace mankind with their fairy love and getting into trouble for it. Mankind has got a lot to answer for. Best of luck in the contest.
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Haha that's what I thought you were from the images you penned
Lovely flow and rhyme and a really cute tale Thanks so much for your entry!
Gaylene
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Ha Ha.Love it.Poor fairies.A fun poem for the contest, Ros
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Love the final stanza--LOL----Great creativity and imagination in this write--
Well Done and best of luck in the contest!
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LOL what an interesting point of view. I'm still swatting those critters LOL
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hehe.. if anything that looks fairly like a mosquito i will certainly squash it.. its how i am programmed
this is a wonderful poem and the contest is made for you to enter it.. i find your rhymes one of the finest and wish i could rhyme like you.
best of luck my dear friend
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