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My Stranger

Where did you go
And why did you leave?
Why did you betray
The girl you used to be?
This shallow shadow
That's taken her place-
She looks like you,
She wears your face...
But she's not the girl
That I once knew;
Tell me- how could you
Do this to you???

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The girl I knew was a wonderful, bright, beautiful, caring person; she's lost somewhere, replaced by one that isn't very likeable...but I still love her & it really hurts

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  • PastelMoons gold member
    August 17
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    I know this feeling well.
    I love the way you express yourself
    You make me feel !!
    Thanks for sharing

    ~Pastel


    • PandorasBox
      October 2
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      Whew its been forever since I've been on here...thanks for the comment! I'm glad you liked it & could relate (tho doesn't it kinda suck that so many of us here relate & bond over the sad stuff?!)...my daughter (who its about) didn't take too kindly to it, but it WAS pretty blunt I guess.


  • Firequeen
    August 15

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    Awww sis
    this brought tears
    I am sorry for your sadness.
    Love ya tons fire