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Don't let go

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Wrapped in your arms so tightly
I find heaven here on earth
I long to feel you touch me
and take away the hurt.

Kiss my neck, caress me
hold me close, don't let go
only now do I feel you love me
& that's what I really need to know.

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This is for picture #4 (I think)

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  • Diablosanjil
    August 21

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    AWESOME JOB!! I can feel the love in this poem.. It is a great write and goes with the picture very well. Keep penning my dear friend!


  • DaWildChild
    August 11

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    Nice piece very well written, imagery is marvellous and the flow is perfect, i like the way it is centered and looks like stanza two is the reflection of stanza one..lol..thanks for sharing this one...*


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 10

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    Excellent flow to the unforced rhyming verse---
    A very enjoyable read!


  • no more name
    August 10

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    Loved the flow. Not much on muuusshhy but I did enjoy this poem. I just hope my wife doesn't read this as she will give me hell for not writing a love poem for her. lol

  • goalsv
    August 10

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    A very good and romantic write, a greeat form and flow also.

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