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Love to Live a Life

Who cares about others
Do they care about you
You are the one who suffers
Do they come to help you
Better be yourself and know
There will never be a love blow
Coming straight to your heart
Rather you would only get hurt

Love will never cover your Life
Life will never move without Love
You'll never be alone on earth
If you try to love yourself first

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I like this, even if it is worse as a poem but it means a lot to me
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  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 22

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    Wise words..especially the last four lines..Love does make life go on...and the old saying about loving others as we would love ourselves applies here.....You write powerful lines..Keep penning!


  • Rainbow-dreams
    August 14

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    Nice work

    Like this, who cares, hmmm you make so much powerful statements in this short piece you have written here..

    welll done


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    August 11

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    Bravo! Brava! Bravissimo!
    The last two definitely resonate within me.
    They consist of a truthful ring. Nice writing!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ The Rocker Who Lost All


  • vampireintherain
    August 10

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    loving your self would sure make a diffrence otherewise life is crap, sorry I am sad lately, otherwise it is a good poem.


  • Sir Squigglim
    August 10
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    It's beatiful. And completely true.

    I love the way you write.


  • sonia 77
    August 10

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    i must say this to you!!! you will defiantly be alone on earth if you try to love yourself first . sorry this is how i think, love others first and they will love you back . good work


  • PainedLoner
    August 10

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    Very well done! I feel the same way about things brother. We sit there and wonder if friends really do care for us. But know this, I do care for you brother. You mean the world. And know that I love you and that you mean the world to me. I miss you brother and hope to hear from you soon.

    Much love,
    Your sister britwants


  • Zia-
    August 10
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    Nice write as always,and i can see you loved by many on AP, WEL A NICE PENNED PIECE


  • Princess-nee
    August 10

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    Heya, sorry for not commenting your works.Recently been a bit busy,but whenever I get time on AP I do read your works.Because your poems are very REAL.
    And this poem is wonderful.Nice picture take care


    • sOuL
      August 10
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      Thank you very much dear princess-nee


  • babygirl2582 silver member
    August 10
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    :)

    Well Stated...


  • ShaShay
    August 10

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    You show true feelings. A great messgae here. Anyone would be proud to have you as a friend or as a son. LOL
    Mama


  • sonia 77
    August 10
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    wow... love this one ! but i dont love you ha..ha.. , ar you happy my dear now ??

    • sOuL
      August 10
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      Please don't make a comment like you love me. I am sorry if sound rude but i don't think what you said is correct. Thank You for your comment.


  • StarEyes
    August 10

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    Rehan,

    What a wonderful read this one is! And it is sooooo full of wisdom! Great job! I love the message in this one!

    and love

    Nyetta

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