Am I going the right way?
Or is anywhere I go where you want as long as I claim you?
Am I turning the right cheek?
How much do I have to pay before you let me through?
I keep looking for the wrong thing
When the prize is contentment
Am I satisfied or do I want another life than the one you know that I should have?
I want to be on the pike, not sitting in my yard waiting for a change
I keep looking for the wrong things when I should be looking at you
Your prize is contentment with a fire to spread your truth
When you let me learn of you it doesn't let me down.
If all I ever knew was you I would be safe and sound
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Written August 6, 2009
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there's like two decent lines but beside that its forgetable and a bit boring. There's really no point but poetry is allowed to suck so....whatever. I tried liking it but I dont even see potential. Consider this space wasted.
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I don't understand the second line. Are some words misplaced or something?
"Am I turning the right cheek?"
I really love that.
"Am I satisfie or do I want..." that is such a long and wordy line. I would try to rewrite it, or at the very least, break it up into a few different lines.
I do love the following line, however.
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