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A Part of the Waiting

If I am here and do not take a number,
they do not call my name
yet am I not the same
in body heart and soul
do I not breath the same air
have I not waited as long?



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  • on the beach
    August 26
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    sense of general waiting or a secret particular?

  • Synchronicity gold member
    August 10

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    Call waiting

    To wax philosophic while waiting in queue is the mark of a true poet. Congratulations for finding your calling while waiting. The depth of some poems can be measured more in the questions they ask rather than the answers they give. I would thank you for leaving me with a question to ponder. And to play the fool I would add, "And if you cut the queue, will it bleed?" Good luck in the contest.