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Over and done.

I loved you so badly,
I want you so much,
See you smile, hear you laugh,
And feel your touch,
But I can't anymore,
Or any thing of such.

You're so close,
Yet so far away,
I want to run,
But you make me stay,
That though we have nothing,
Just nothing, to say.

You made me give up,
You made me feel bad,
For everything a first time,
Though I hate being sad,
Or crying my eyes out,
Which leaves litle to add.

Goodbye my lover,
Goodbye my pet,
Yet you'll life a good life,
With him, I bet,
This war is over,
Though I haven't lost yet.

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  • Mister Monday
    August 11, 2009
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    Deep. Nicely written. You amaze me with your work, ma'dame. :3 Love you.


    • Hollow WhisperDoll
      August 12, 2009
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      Thank you :3 It's a poem I wrote for an RP though XD So that explains why it says 'him'. It's a yaoi 8D