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40 hours

 

 

 

 

Last weekend -

I lived afterhours,

   struggled through

   the twilight zone

      and yawned a cramp

      in my cheeks.

 

 

And though it seems

that a beautiful morning

could leave me sunshit,

               broken mirrors

               and a longing

                to meet the person

                behind that wall,

I'm willing to undergo.

 

 

Cause to me,

you really seem to be worth it.

 

 

 

 

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Still hoping... Had a wonderful weekend - been awake for over 40 hours but I had a god damn fantastic time...

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  • Random Renee
    September 14

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    broken mirrors

    and a longing

    to meet the person

    behind that wall,

    I'm willing to undergo.





    Cause to me,

    you really seem to be worth it.



    ahha very awesome write...glad you had fun that weekend..we all damn well need those times!
    cheers


  • Dancing Feather gold member
    August 10

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    I like this. lol I know who you wrote it for/about too. =P

    I'm glad you're happy and falling for him hun. =D you deserve a good man by your side.

    Kayla


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    August 10

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    oooooooh amazing lea-bum, i love your writing!
    sunshit is that anything like when i say sunfucked?

    much love
    dikke knuffel lieverd
    Tasha


  • Sam-I-Am
    August 10

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    This is cool. I really like the layout, very different. "And though it seems

    that a beautiful morning

    could leave me sunshit,

    broken mirrors

    and a longing

    to meet the person

    behind that wall,"

    My favorite bit and yeah, "sunshit" brilliant XD

    Sam


  • Nicolette gold member
    August 10

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    and you wrote a god damn wonderful poem too. you know, leander, you really should write more because you are so talented, and i just love your poetry. i hope next weekend is just as fantastic, and the next one, and the next one. beautiful poetry. oh yes, i just loved the word "sunshit"!!

    ~ Nicolette

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