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Deceiving age

Alone,
unloved,
Innocent
from killings...
Not knowing that he's next..

A contest entry

hope you like it..It is so random...

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    August 11
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    Deeply profound... x


  • mysticstorm gold member
    August 11
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    Ouch! very deep and sad...great work!

    Best,

    mystic


    • xxiheartpoetryxx
      August 11
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      thx...:) hehe..its so random..Im glad you appreciated it..



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  • Leance
    August 10

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    Wow, now this makes a very sad statement. However, in several different countries, this in fact is very true. Well written and heart wrenching.
    Best of luck in the contest.
    Leance

    • xxiheartpoetryxx
      August 10
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      wow ! thanks for appreciating it..yeah, people are just so mean and violent, killing innocent child without knowing that they could be the way to success or something..



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