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When Memories are a Curse [I'll Never Forget]

~ Dear Nate ~

  I can't believe it's been 10 years ~ There's been a million tears
I still miss you every damn day ~ More than I can say
I cry as I stand under the stars,
remembering when...
we were under the stars together
travelling the universe
[Memories are a Curse]

They say I need to forget you ~ Just proves they never knew you
Forgetting a Soul Mate like You ~ Impossible to do
I cry as I lay in my bed,
remembering when...
i'd cry and you'd hug me
&&
everything would be fine
&&
you were there every time
[The Curse is Mine]

The day you died Nate
&&
Left me behind
You promised me...
I'd be fine
[I'm not sure you were right]

Now I'm still alone
Left with this curse
&&
Sometimes, It god damn hurts
One thought though hurts a little more
What happens if One Day...
I can't remember anymore
[The Death of the Curse Will Open Deaths Door]

Author notes

a letter to  a boy ~ he died when i was a teenager

you can see more in the notes of this write:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4372997

He was my whole world ~ I'll remember him always

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  • sgking123 gold member
    September 3

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    beautiful

    dear can anybody else have a stronger start...thiswas fabulous stuff...you must have nailed the besotted guy there and then and thethered him to you like...forever..thiswas ehs tart i was talking about:

    can't believe it's been 10 years ~ There's been a million tears
    I still miss you every damn day ~ More than I can say


  • xeroabyss II
    August 10
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    This is why im glad forever never really is forever