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so much pain, endured and forgotten.
tears of anger and of blood.
darkness inside, nothingness on the outside.

Feelings of hopelessness, and of regret.
lost time weeping and sins to forget.

life is timeless, as is love.
no more happiness, or feelings to miss.

All these things I have forever felt.
Until we met, then things began to meld.

Life was meaningless, no use in living.
Then you came,and i began feeling.

words like love, caring and respect,
i knew not what these things meant.

My life was bleak, it had no meaning.
then you came and i started believing.

Love is around, if you chose to seek it.
It took me too long, but I kept on seeking.

You have made me strong,
confident to call myself a man.

I know now that love is a burden,
but one i could not have gotten
without your being.

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  • Superstarjod22
    August 10

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    Another great piece of work. Did u mean "love is a burDen* ) ? Love the title! lol j/k I enjoyed this poem seriously.. nice work