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Unfinished

We know there's beauty in pain
- remnants circling the drain
- the soft-pumping vein
- a slow growing stain
even when fear takes its stead
- eyes darting in dread
- the taut-pulled thread
- a dark lonely bed

and here's where the rest goes, as soon as I come up with it

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Yeah, I got this far in my head and figured I'd put it down before I lost it. I like it alright so far, but I need to bring it home. We'll see.

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