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Nothing Goes As Planned

These thoughts that violate
I cannot seem to annihilate

They take over my dreams
And hallucinations impede

Like a world that is forged
Like a stomach that purged

What I have left cannot be real
As I make myself a deal

I look myself in the eyes
And say even more lies

Things will be better tomorrow
But the next day with great sorrow

I am back where I started
And I never seemed to have departed

For it seems that the next day
Was just like a replay

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A R T I S T T O U C H
Would you marry a rubber duck?

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  • XxNinjaNemoxX
    August 10
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    Cool rhyming
    Cool entry
    Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in my contest!
    xoxo.


  • Biggest-MIstake
    August 10
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    great ryhming and i love it this is a great write