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Lamentation

 

 

 

wandering through dark

left behind

hiding from the moon

I am blind

 

 

wadding through these tears

can you see

forming oceans 'round

let me be

 

 

winding through my fears

cold as ice

feeling sorrows call

roll the dice

 

 

 

 

Rev. Alimae

Author notes

Photo 1: "swallow me and spit me out" by Princess of Shadows

Rarely do I write that for which has no punctuation, but this one did not need any as far as I can see. Enjoy.

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 25
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    Short & sweet, yet full of depth.
    Good concepts throughout,
    and visuals to conjoin it.

    Best of luck & thanks for entering