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Take me Away

Tell me that you'll take me away
Tell me this isn't the only place

Where sunsets are deeper
and the summers are hotter

Where the people are different
and views aren't the same

Tell me that you'll take me away...

Baby I don't belong here
maybe I've been here too long, dear

I want to be far from this place
Promise that you'll take me away?

What do you think i could do to make this better?

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  • Su94
    November 25
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    Oh this is really nice, sometimes it just seems like you want to leave and get away for once,this really shows it,I like your writing its nice!