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Mr. Saturday Night!

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Alas! The stars are oh so bright
Here I am...MR. SATURDAY NIGHT!

Ready to dance the night away
Making the ladies swoon and sway!

I am ready to have all sorts of fun
I'm Mr. Saturday Night...I'm NUMBER ONE!

Just having quite a ball
in the ole dance hall!

I am ready to do my thing...I am out of sight
Because I am known to all as MR. SATURDAY NIGHT!

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  • Jesann gold member
    September 29
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    Love this one...it's full of fun and life ...& there's nothing like a dance on a Saturday night !!!
    Well Done.


  • Lcp
    August 30
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    wickid

    i really felt like i could relate to this as i spend a lot of time down at the dance halls. good one


  • Copy
    August 26

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    I have a verdict.

    There is something just so simple and yet so meaningful about your work, silly even. It's not complicated and has no deep thinking behind it, it's simply expressing joy for simple things that make you well, joyful. I admire it, a lot.
    You sorta take me back to the basics.

    Well done.


    • Patpowers silver member
      August 26
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      Thanks for enjoying this! I believe in not taking things too seriously in life! Glad you liked the poem!


  • EternitysLastWish
    August 18

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    Hey I love this! The rhyme scheme is spot on and really works to add to the overall effect of the poem. It's great to hear about you enjoying yourself Pat, I know things have been tough lately. I really enjoyed reading this.

    Nice picture by the way, very smart!
    Jess


  • bigperm
    August 11

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    way to let loose

    you've been a little glum lately, so it's good to see you get to let loose. Hope you got to cut some rug as they say.lol


  • Emerald Dog
    August 10

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    Hey Pat! Good to see you out enjoying yourself and capturing the moment in photo and words! I hope to see a full length pic of you at the ball - as I'm betting you were actually wearing shorts and no shoes with the jacket and bow-tie! Thanks for shining on.

    • Patpowers silver member
      August 10
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      Nope I was wearing a complete suit and shoes! THANKS!

    • Patpowers silver member
      August 10
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      Nope... I was wearing a full suit and shoes for this! Thanks for asking!

  • luv2dream gold member
    August 10

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    this made me chuckle. what a fun poem and looks like you had a blast!


  • daviscth silver member
    August 10

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    I love this photo of you Pat! I can just picture you tripping the light fantastic with a beautiful lady on your arm... Thanks for sharing.


  • UncleDunk gold member
    August 10

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    Makes me wish I could dance. Nice read. Love the name change, by the way.


  • Shuberth
    August 10

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    good for you !!!!!
    This poem is so beautiful, it cooled down some of anger today. i like rhymes.
    btw you are not the bare foot poet anymore (you changed your name though)
    this was worth worth reading.

    Shuberth


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    August 10

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    This makes me feel like dancing < my best move lol Fantastic write my friend...You look really snazzy in your picture as well Keep dancing


  • Frogzter gold member
    August 10

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    Er, ah that would be Mr. Barefoot Saturday night if you please! Lol... Dance the night away my friend.

  • Thomas beechey
    August 10

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    THREE THUMBS UP!

    I see ol' Pat, he done be puttin'
    His foot down on all the barefootin'
    "No more barefootin'," Pat proclaims
    "That's why I've gone and changed my name!

    "Cause soon the weather be gettin' colder
    "And I'm wearin' a tux with a hand on my shoulder
    "But, most of all, I'm Mr. Saturday Night!
    "And goin' barefootin' just don't seem right!"

    "From this day forth," Pat continues on
    "My barefootin' days be all long gone
    "I'm now Patpowers and I'm on the move
    "Now, 'scuse me cause I gots to groove!"


  • Cup-a-Joe
    August 10

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    Pat,

    Hey You the Man! I see that someone is hanging on to you.
    Nery nice pic also, i must add.
    Joe

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