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[ You touched my face, ]

You touched my face,
You wound your fingers in my hair,
My body was melting,
My heart was pounding.
I wanted you then,
More than anything else.

I looked at your lips,
And wanted them on mine;
I leaned a couple times,
But then pulled away,
I almost lost control
How bad could that be...

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  • Scars-On-Her-Arms
    September 29
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    i love this.
    and i've totally felt this way before.
    and i pulled away to, but i wish i hadn't now.
    But it was AMAZING )