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Reminisce

Wrapped in quiet moments
we sit reminiscing old times

comparing yesterdays,

with today

wondering what

tomorrows will bring.


Fire crackling, soft music, wine,

family photos of past times

promises offered, promises kept.

 

We had dreams not so long ago,

ups, downs, rocky roads.

 

Here we are today reminiscing.

 

A wonderful world that of love;
makes us whole, makes us true,
as we watch the fire, sip our wine,

all our dreams continue

to grow into forever.

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  • Desire gold member
    August 12

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    Thank You!

    I tried to post once...I did not take...
    Hopefully it will this time

    Thank You for Your entry: Reminisce
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times ~
    I'm Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest
    You took the prompt and brought forth much for the Mind to feast upon~
    Bravo!! When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~
    Woven Strengths: I am nudged to say: Bless Your Heart
    for some reason while reading...I kept feeling this sense of longing...but also
    a heavy Heart filled with Memories...however not feeling any sense of bitterness
    for why something things worked out and why some things did not
    Bitterness not taken in context re: person but more re: things
    And I am shown word: Dreams...
    For example if another person achieved something You wished to achieve...
    I am not getting that bitterness as to why not You for this achievement
    I get..in time...if it is meant to be...it will be kind of feeling
    I'm trying NOT to babble working to decipher Images that come to fast

    Seeing phrase: Growing old together...
    Also: Been there done that...
    For some reason I am shown Henry Fonda and movie: On Golden Pond
    However that is to be Interpreted...
    Love the direction You took with this prompt
    Hopefully my comment to Your write makes sense
    Powerful verse and message You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    A wonderful world that of love;
    makes us whole, makes us true,
    Vivid Imagery poured in these lines...

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice
    also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    with much love and light~ Desire~*~


    • AngelicMistress gold member
      August 13

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      Desire:
      I thank you for enjoying my submitted piece, and for having given me the Silver;
      I am very pleased to have accomplished what I wanted to, and that you read this
      piece loud and clear.

      You seem to actually get into my head, and KNOW.

      Thank you for you,
      blessed be,
      your friend forever,
      AngelicMistress...Tanya

      • Desire gold member
        August 13
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        You are more than Welcome and Congratulations!!
        I am Happy my words made sense and Thank You for taking the time to enter
        for I am Honored
        Keep that quill dancing Beautiful~
        Woot~

  • Bob Fox
    August 10

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    Reminisce

    and how it should be. Those times never fprgotten. Your wine my JD and wonderful memories remade. The lips still waiting.