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Gut Feelings

Singing my heart out hoping for the impossible comfort,
That someone up there’s listening to me.

Hoping that someone will take away my pain,
That someone out there loves me they way I’ve been hoping for.

How come they never notice?
They never seem to see what’s right in front of their faces.

My gut always tells me the worst,
And it’s always true.

Holding back the tears and making it worse,
How come I can never cry when I need to?

My gut’s ripping up my heart,
And it’s killing me.

Why

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  • Ez Writer silver member
    September 21
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    A powerful , passionate and touching poem !
    Solid penning ! Thank you for sharing ...
    Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy