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My Very Unique Sister

God's child ready to play
ready to leave the house everyday
loving, caring, and a wonderful child
descending from the heavens
and into my family
bad but beautiful
life changing everyday
loving, caring, beautiful, and life changing
the Lord's child, my mother's child
My very unique sister
without her in this world
It would never be the same

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  • Megan Awesome
    August 9

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    This is very sweet. I think it was very repetative, though. If you change anything about it I would reword it and change it up a bit. Other than that it's a great thing to write about. Congrats on the amazing sister. I wish I could say I could stand mine like that haha.
    Megan