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cloudy sky's and rat infested hells don't mix...

 

Damn you

forbidden eyes

you amuse me

pitiful dreams

an incoherent beg

far from viable

vigor throbbing fall...

A contest entry

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  • J. M. Spenser
    August 31

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    Very nicely done. This is wonderfully beautiful. A picture set in words you have given. And I see it well. Great job. Thank you for your entry.