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My last drink of life

In the tavern late one night,
as I sat, sipping at my mead,
a person of sorts,
with a big brown cloak
came to squat next to me.

 

"Stranger..." he said in a voice rough as stone.

"I have always stayed in the corner,

never making a move,

spying at patrons from 'neeth my hood,

but you I have never spied nor seen before."

 

The man obviously wanted trouble

and I really did not wish to give him any.

I scolded my brew with one final swig,

picked up my feet and got ready to make haste.

Just as I stood ready to leave

I saw a flash, a glimpse,

dagger pulled from sheath.

 

Before I could react the steel met my breast.

I staggered and fell connecting with the ground

with such a force that all of mankind must have shook.

The darkness fell over me

and I felt a deadly breeze.

 

But I stood up,

and watched, and saw,

a lifeless corpse,

stone dead on the tavern floor.

 

A hand touched my disimbodied shouldier,

so I spun around and saw Death

and he smiled as wide as the heavens

and so did I.  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

I'm obsessed with Death, as in the Grim reaper, and what one would do when the keeper of the sand would come for you.

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  • taylorndncar gold member
    August 10

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    this is an interesting effort; very good, but something about it tells me, you aren't acquainted with form, the different types of poetry style. this is almost free-verse, but there is a hint of rhyme on occasion. i like it. you handle description very well...!