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[ Running against time ]

Running against time
Ya know how it goes
Daylight comes
Fades

so

quickly

Can't run too fast
Not that slow tho
Fast enough fast enough
Going

going

gone

Here we go
Again and again
Flying higher this time
Floating

on a

cloud

Hey hey hey
Can ya here me now
Thru the silence
Cutting

cutting

thru

To you and me
To the time im supposed to
beat once and for all
Like

the

system

Slow down calm down
Its not that exciting
Maybe what seems like enticing
Everythings

in

slow mo

Here we go
One last time
No no no
Everythings

too fucking

slow

Dont tell me what to fix tell me what you want

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  • xRigoRxMortiSx
    November 19, 2009
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    wow...umm I really like the end...you know with the cursing and such...it brings out the emotion and frustration...


    • Rize
      December 13, 2009
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      thanks bitch i cant believe ur still on this shit...i'm fuckin free as fuck